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Re: The Junior Accountant Chp.2
Hey, it's Leza again. ^^ Okay, for starters, the paragraphs aren't clumped together, so that's good. I also noticed that you kept your attention towards meticulous details. Well done. But ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: The Junior Accountant (Chp.1)
O_o Well, while everyone's said it for me all, I am going to review, so here it is. I will say this - your knack for detail is something I ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: The Story Teller
It's Leza again. ^^ Wow, and I mean it. :P Still jarring every time I look back and forth between the posts to refresh myself, but I guess it can't ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: That's So Edward
Haha, I loved it. :P This one takes a different direction from other Twilight spoofs I've seen so far, so well done. Poor, poor Rob. :P Robyn.
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Story Teller
Hi, it's Leza. Good job, as usual. I especially liked the split personality twist. ^^ The sudden difference in writing style is a little jarring, but I suppose it couldn't ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Emotional Aura (.hack)
Thanks Lydia! ^^ If I remember correctly, it only took me about an hour or so. Re-coloring's much easier than making a thing out of scratch. If you take a ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
Wow...and I mean it. :P I had to stiffle my laughter so my mum wouldn't wake up. :D Derek's absolutely right, the books don't compare - 'coz Twilight sucks. It ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Anime drawing...sort of.
The nearest I ever came to a good anime drawing :P I guess I don't practice much...anyways, this is one of the characters in the novel I'm writing. Sorry for ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Emotional Aura (.hack)
A re-coloring of Aura I did while I was bored. ^^ Done with Photoshop CS2. Emotional_Aura.jpg
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: The Story Teller
Hi Durrie, it's Lean again. :P Again, it was well done. The flow of the story is smooth, and there aren't any grammar mistakes as far as I can see. ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Two Souls - Prologue (Fixed)
Hi Kyo, it's Leza. ^^ Well done, but I still found it a little heavy on the eyes. You could do with separating the single paragraphs into multiple, shorter paragraphs, ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Shared World Anthology Project
I'm definitely interested, so count me in. ^^
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Erithean Seas
The new edit is below...I couldn't bring myself to delete the old one until I had some reviews on the new version... Erithea of the fairest seas How many you ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The Mystic Dance
I'll give it a line-by-line review. ^^ The men all gathered round to see the show in the street. A single woman danced, streamers waved around, This is supposed to ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Ambrean Circle
Cold, gleaming and shiny - those adjectives described the glass-top tables and polished marble floor surfaces of Ambrean Laboratories Inc. When you were younger, you learned that nothing ever came ...
Jan 12, 2010
