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  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Junior Accountant Chp.2

    Hey, it's Leza again. ^^ Okay, for starters, the paragraphs aren't clumped together, so that's good. I also noticed that you kept your attention towards meticulous details. Well done. But ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Junior Accountant (Chp.1)

    O_o Well, while everyone's said it for me all, I am going to review, so here it is. I will say this - your knack for detail is something I ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Story Teller

    It's Leza again. ^^ Wow, and I mean it. :P Still jarring every time I look back and forth between the posts to refresh myself, but I guess it can't ...

    Jan 21, 2010
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: That's So Edward

    Haha, I loved it. :P This one takes a different direction from other Twilight spoofs I've seen so far, so well done. Poor, poor Rob. :P Robyn.

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Story Teller

    Hi, it's Leza. Good job, as usual. I especially liked the split personality twist. ^^ The sudden difference in writing style is a little jarring, but I suppose it couldn't ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Emotional Aura (.hack)

    Thanks Lydia! ^^ If I remember correctly, it only took me about an hour or so. Re-coloring's much easier than making a thing out of scratch. If you take a ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter

    Wow...and I mean it. :P I had to stiffle my laughter so my mum wouldn't wake up. :D Derek's absolutely right, the books don't compare - 'coz Twilight sucks. It ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime drawing...sort of.

    The nearest I ever came to a good anime drawing :P I guess I don't practice much...anyways, this is one of the characters in the novel I'm writing. Sorry for ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Emotional Aura (.hack)

    A re-coloring of Aura I did while I was bored. ^^ Done with Photoshop CS2. Emotional_Aura.jpg

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Story Teller

    Hi Durrie, it's Lean again. :P Again, it was well done. The flow of the story is smooth, and there aren't any grammar mistakes as far as I can see. ...

    Jan 19, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Two Souls - Prologue (Fixed)

    Hi Kyo, it's Leza. ^^ Well done, but I still found it a little heavy on the eyes. You could do with separating the single paragraphs into multiple, shorter paragraphs, ...

    Jan 15, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Shared World Anthology Project

    I'm definitely interested, so count me in. ^^

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Erithean Seas

    The new edit is below...I couldn't bring myself to delete the old one until I had some reviews on the new version... Erithea of the fairest seas How many you ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Mystic Dance

    I'll give it a line-by-line review. ^^ The men all gathered round to see the show in the street. A single woman danced, streamers waved around, This is supposed to ...

    Jan 13, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Ambrean Circle

    Cold, gleaming and shiny - those adjectives described the glass-top tables and polished marble floor surfaces of Ambrean Laboratories Inc. When you were younger, you learned that nothing ever came ...

    Jan 12, 2010


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone