CelticaNoir

It was great. :D Other than what Spitfire said, of course, it's okay, I think. You could still do some good by putting those gaps in between the paragraphs, but ...

A rather well-done cliffhanger. But I wish you put a few more spaces between the lines, like so: “I be a bee, I see a bee, I ate a little ...

Renaheid Rena cut into Amy's question, not allowing Carus to even open his mouth to answer. "Well, I only see one choice - lounge about like idiots until Deva shows ...

Wow, those changes look awesome. :D I don't know what it'll do to me though, 'coz my server's a killer. T_T

Sorry I replied so late! Here's my two-cents to you guys. :P Renaheid "Sky transport. Won't mind the wind blowing in my face for once." Rena muttered as she sipped ...

Okay then, here I go with the 2nd profile. :P Name: Lenneth Team: Harlots Appearance: She has dark brown hair and blue eyes. Is very pale, almost like the moon ...

I could be two parts. :D But wouldn't that be unfair? :P I suggested that each of us play two characters in the other topic, although I'm not sure if ...

Hm... I don't want to see this storybook keep lagging on, so can we each have two characters instead of just one? It doesn't seem as if anybody else is ...

Well, I think Kaedee's pointed out any previous mistakes, so I digress. It was brilliant! I especially loved how mysterious you made it - the reason behind Kade's pursuit of ...

Name: Robyn Age: 16 Gender: Female ______ Top 3 Movies Title: Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire Genre: Fantasy Title: Sense and Sensibility Genre: Romance Title: A Room With ...

But I already said Reena was ten years old...T_T And anyways, this was written on a sudden impulse. :P

A post-Civil War snippet with a salesman, his niece and a cart filled with voodoo dolls. A silly drabble, not very serious, and mostly plot-less. Read at your own risk. ...

I'm still in, so yeah.

Leza here! ^^ Okay...this is good for a first time script. I liked the idea, and while Vast is right about the characters and all that, it wasn't bad either. ...

Name: Renaheid Team (Devas or Harlots): Devas Appearance (Pictures are fine): She has rich, flaming red hair and smoky grayish-green eyes. She is of average build, of light weight and ...