CelticaNoir

9/10. Interesting comparison. :P

Show, don't tell. Honestly. :D That simple tip allowed me to expand on my writing significantly. I used to tell, tell, tell...now I just show my readers what I want ...

-_- I was hoping to name a character...anyways, here goes. Gender: Male Appearance: Unruly dark brown hair, any age from ten to thirty (yes, this is a coming-of-age story), unusual ...

Malis Malis had been quiet for hours, watching the madness unfold like a blanket. She didn't quite know what to make of it - with people arguing left and right, ...

Malis Malis didn't know whether to be surprised or stay neutral, as the girl disappeared. The girl hadn't bought a thing, but as soon as she stepped in, the entire ...

Malis Clang. Clang. Clang. Steam hung in the gloomy little room like a bad omen as the hammer rose and descended rhythmically over the glowing mass of metal, the sounds ...

-shrieks in laughter- Ahahahaha! -snort- That was one of the best fanfics in the site I've seen so far. While some of the comments directed by Patricia to certain teachers ...

Thanks Dragon Lady! :D I just want to explain one of your statements here: you said that Fakia had been wronged by Mute, but that's not the reason why he's ...

Name: Malis Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Malis is considered rather pretty, with messy light brown hair and sharp bright blue eyes. She is of medium height, and has a ...

Thanks Tiger! ^^ I've edited the story like you said.

Okay, so this is my first piece in like...months. On top of that it's rather rushed, so I'm kind of scared that it's really horrible. Heh. Anyway, the inspiration came ...

I really liked this, especially when we realised that Nicholas was her son and not her lover, like I had originally thought. I also loved the images you put into ...

So I was wondering, does anybody know of any good soundtracks to listen to? Something operatic or orchestral would be a lot better than metal, by the way. :D

I apparently write like Vladimir Nabokov (three times), Dan Brown (once) and Leo Tolstoy (twice). Funny enough, I've never really read Nabokov before, so...

Okay...this was definitely brilliant. And I mean it. Not many pieces here (or elsewhere) deal with the perspective of a two year old so very descriptively. There were no faults ...