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Re: Eleanor *Novel in Progess* Chapter 3
Okay, so, where do I start? -_- While I loved your idea, and your dialogue was a fresh change from some of the stories I've been reviewing all day, it ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Celtica-nee-san's Dojo
Nobody else? :(
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Currently Unnamed (Chapter Three)
Hey Cairo. Okay, so...what can I say? :P It wasn't bad, but I felt the action was a tad bit slow at times. I'm more of a get-hooked-in-five-paragraphs kind of ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter Three
Hey Teardrop. :) Okay, I have to say that this could've been fairly good, except I felt that your description was really awkward and your dialogue a little - no, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Cirque Du Fous (Permission Only; Started)
Name: Estelle Duvont Age: 19 Time Period: 19th century, Victorian era. Gender: Female Appearance: With the exception of her dress, which is ratty and torn in several places: new_victorian_age_by_svent
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: Realm of Shadows *Full | Starting*
Aleyda | Fields in front of the Manor "Harry! Harry! HARRY!" Aleyda watched as the strange boy in front of the manor screamed out for someone several times. He looked ...
Apr 27, 2011 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter One
Thanks Ten! Your review was mui appreciated. xD
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Runaway - Chapter One
Chapter One - The Girl Steam pumped out of the train's chimney, coating the surrounding area with thick smoke and heat. The windows fogged up against her hand; the glass ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Runaway - Prologue
Prologue. Dancing, dancing, dancing...he could hear the piano in his head. One, two, three. Tap. Tap. Tap. A voice carrying a soft melody broke through the air. Maybe it was ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: The Emperor's City *Permission Only* (Dead)
Isolde | Throne Room "Father, stop." Isolde stepped forwards, unable to remain silent while all of this was going on. Altair, you sneak. He must have had her followed when ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Twins in Time (unofficial title) - Prologue
I loved this! :) I loved that you set this in Italy; the first paragraph, especially, sounds rather authentic. Also, lipstick bombs? Awesome. XD I thought your character was a ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
I think this is really good, but you could do with a few overall grammar and spelling checks. A few lines could do with some work, and you could describe ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Sims 2 neighborhood *updates*
Name: Robyn. Gender: Female Star sign: Cancer Eye color: Really dark brown. Clothing style: Casual-formal. Hair color: Black. Hair style: Short-to medium, usually let loose. Skin tone: Light brown. Ot
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Realm of Shadows *Full | Starting*
Name: Aleyda Sarel Age: 19 in appearance | 274 in Elven years. Gender: Female Race: Elf Home Realm: Alamea Appearance: df8f01a536eeaab0ce7b4af21c302306.jpg Personality: Aleyda is a sweet and sometimes
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Divine Chaos DT
*keeps in reading list*
Apr 11, 2011