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I'm having the same issue with Green Room that Lauren described. This also happens if I try to use the Oldest and Newest sorters. Using Google Chrome, version 23.0.1271.97 on ...

Designation: Ovid Gender: Female Skill-set: Providing valuable wool to naked humans, eating the next generation of cotton (AKA cotton seeds), slicing and dicing things with her super sharp teeth (name

I would like to be a sheep. A sheep with a stick up its butt. A sheep with a cotton sweater as a best friend. This sheep will likely have ...

We all know that Mary Sues are one of the many issues that plague beginning writers. But weren't we all beginners at one point? Surely there must be many Sues ...

What does E3 stand for, anyway? Electronic Entertainment Expo. It's one of the biggest publicity events for the video gaming hardware and software industries. This is the place where big ...

Hello. I'll be honest, this piece has left me confused about what tone you tried to convey. On one hand I see many grammatical errors, common character archetypes, and an ...

I feel sorry for the girl hiding under the boulder. She's just like me, but wimpier, surrounded by people who know what they're doing but not being able to do ...

"Kyll Kyll Kyll Kyll Kyll help meeee!" I shout as I flee from an onslaught of dollar sign shurikens and comma grenades, tossed haphazardly by unskilled hands. Though their aim ...

Hello. To be honest I'm not very impressed with this, but looking beyond the flaws I see some potential for this story provided you are willing to work hard. So ...

Hello there! I really enjoyed this piece since this is a situation I easily relate to, not only with school but with any situation where I'm feeling anxious. Just like ...

Hello there! A little nitpick before I begin. "Mortuus sum" roughly translates to "I am a corpse" or "I am the dead." Now this next one may not be grammatically ...

Hello there. Let me start with what speaks to me most about this work, and that's how wooden the prose and description is. Now I don't mean wooden as in ...

I agree with Wolf. This version is much better, though I still see some room for improvement. But before I get to that let me tell you why I like ...

Hello. The very first thing that jumps out at me is the fact that you like to use commas. Perhaps a bit too much, in fact. There is more than ...

Hey there! Welcome to the site! I'm Dover and I'll be reviewing your work today. But before I get to that a rule of thumb when it comes to figuring ...