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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Collection of 50 Words

    Oops, I accidently put the explanation in the spoiler. Okay, I hope this is clearer for you now (:

    Nov 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Writers Block

    Thanks for all the reviews, guys! I've changed a couple of things around, so hopefully they sit better than before. I'm actually really excited, as 10 is the hightest amount ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Three)

    Thanks very much for the review :P Um... no, it's not the last chapter xD There's actually a lot, lot more to come so please stay tuned :P But that's ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part One)

    Guys, thanks for the love :D Kiwisatsuma: I was really confused with your name at first and was then all... oh my god, it says Kiwi and satsuma! And then ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Teenage Bruises

    Thanks to everybody for the nitpicks; I'll sort those out in a couple of minutes. And secondly, thanks to the four of you who reviewed :D I really appreciate that ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Two)

    Thanks Dudette! And okay, I shall look forward to reading it, theotherone :D As for the 'her,' it's Timi that I'm referring to. I didn't want to say: Even if ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Three)

    Hey guys :) Thank you for both reviewing :) Now, IcyFlame, I'll come address your review :) So, I've made the edits that you suggested. The only problem I came ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Story of Us (Part One)

    Hey Tabby :) Thanks for the reply. I read and reviewed your piece, by the way. Okay, I get that its cliche and stuff but I don't think it'll turn ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Story of Us (Part One)

    Dudette, I love how you reply to my work :) You're awesome. In fact, the both of you. Thanks so much for the two of you reviewing as you really ...

    Jan 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part One)

    Thanks very much for the brilliant review :) You're really helpful. And I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I've made the changes you suggested, so it should be okay now. ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: 'Cause when you're sixteen (Part Two)

    Thanks very much for the second review :) I really appreciate it. You give great feedback. I've made the changes you suggested, as well as adding a little about how ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Earthquake

    Hey Guys :) Thanks for all of your reviews as they really helped. The piece is part of a letter that a child sends to her penpal after the mass ...

    Jan 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Letter Never Sent

    Thanks to everyone who reviewed! PaperNessa: I'm about to go back and edit the things you've mentioned now. As for the part about the 'loved' - it's because he isn't ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Last Thoughts

    Thanks PaperNessea, for the reply! I very much appreciate it :) I'm going to work on what you said, maybe add a paragraph here and there just to explain a ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: We never were

    Hey Guys :) First of all, thanks to all of you for replying to this. I've taken out that paragraph; rather than rewrite it, I came to the conclusion that ...

    Jan 15, 2011


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