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Re: Chapter 8.2, The Name Game
Hey again! Loved this part just as much as the other one, I love the character development that I'm seeing here. It's an entertaining read- more entertaining than some published ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 8.1, The Name Game
Wow...just wow. I want more! The words you used to describe the feelings that he had for her and the feelings he had about everything that came to his attention ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Becca
The title made me think it was about a girl, not a cat! It was a surprise, and I love surprises. I know you said that you hadn't edited yet, ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: For Want of Water
Hey there! I'm Cate and I'm going to leave a review for you :) 1. Your Title is great, it explains what the story is about somewhat, but leaves the ...
May 28, 2016
