CastlesInTheSky

Reviews are GREATLY appreciated! Part Three: A few times I tried to meet Kyle and a few of his friends at a party, and he tried to meet up the ...

Chapter Two part two continues with Chase. Please note that my spelling and grammar is far from good. Enjoy. Jo stepped forward, her bright green eyes never leaving mine as ...

Firstly, welcome to YWS. I hope you spend many happy hours here :D Or something along those lines. I go over to Megan’s place on the weekend. Her Mum is ...

Wow. All I can say, is, Wow. This was beautifully controlled, with absolutely wonderful metaphors and imagery. The italics wasn't redundant and was used in all the right places, which ...

This is the beginning of chapter two of my story Forsaken. Please note that my spelling and grammar isnt good at all. This story has two narrators. Joanna and Chase. ...

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Mom has made bangers and mash. That's an English meal, not an Australian one, right? Why not research Australian food? I just looked it up, and the results show they ...

09:37. Ugh. Mom won't be liking me waking up late on the guest's first morning here, but I need time to sleep. I need to sleep, because the next fifty ...

I am going to be very honest with you: This is an extraordinary piece of work (: Reminds me of my favourite book, a Swift Pure Cry, by Siobhan Dowd, ...

This was beautifully controlled and artistic. The constant dialogue made it gripping and mysterious. I loved it all, it really made me cry, for some reason or the other. This ...

I absolutely loved this. No grammatical/spelling errors, so no technical nit-picking of mine to mull over. I agree, there is something extremely intense and hypnotizing about this. I love the ...

It's always this kind of romantic atmosphere in new places. It's fun to imagine being , for example Sara from "Little Princess" who's having a feast in the attic. Of ...

"No." I tell Mom that right away. This was phrased a bit awkwardly. I think instead, you should write: "No," I tell Mum right away. Me, Misty and JK had ...

Hey, this is really great and you are an awesome writer. I've been reading all the chapters up to this one. It's centred round really great protagonists and I love ...

Amazing. Hilarious. I read it straight through from beginning to end. It has an excellent plot, it's well written, it's funny and sensitive and the central characters are superbly portrayed. ...