CastlesInTheSky

This is for clograbby's contest, Lost In The Atmosphere. -- It hit me in the face -between the eyes I might add. Fanstastic beginning. SHould be a comma after "eyes". ...

~Hey everyone! I'm here posting part 1 to chapter 6. Hope you all enjoy. :D ~ Of course I will :D Friday morning trickled around as everyone in the Ashworth ...

This is the second part that I wasn't really going to write, but since it made me laugh, I thought I'd post it. It isnt the same narrator, but I ...

Just a warning: This story is eventually going to contain swearing, violence, sexual & drug related references. This story is rated R for a reason and is not for the ...

~Hey, everyone. I'm sorry it took me so long to write this. It seems that I lost all my motivation. :cry: But I'm back and ready with part 2. Enjoy! ...

Well, here it is. My attempt at a short story. Plus, I'm writing it from a guy's point of view and so, guys, tell me if the main character sounds ...

Edward smiled and put his arm around my waist. Even with all of the lights turned off and the curtains closed, I saw his beautiful face. I blinked and smiled ...

~Minor revisions. Since I'm writing another historical fiction, I just couldn't resist this one. So, enjoy!~ Ah, well, I'm all for historical fiction :D A clear water droplet trickled down ...

~It's been awhile since I've posted something up for this story. Sorry, everyone. Well, when school hits tomorrow, I'll probably won't be able to post something up til later. Enjoy!~ ...

Hello readers. I have an english exam coming up this week and I'm preparing for it by writing practice essays for the texts that we studied in class. I would ...

I liked this. The first line, I hate my friends was a really good way to draw people in. Despite the one review, I think this is very good. I ...

haha, jasmine :D All your film casting and playlists make me laugh :lol: Now to the fun bit, a.k.a nitpicks. (:wink:) “Why do you even do it?” Jasper had asked. ...

Yayy!! I'm here! I'm here again, for another great piece of work from The Jasmine :D You always want to tell them, but of course, never get the courage to ...

“Hello, my name is Willow.” Well, that’s what they said her name is. Good start but I think the correct tense would be "that's what they say her name is", ...

Hey there, Welcome to YWS! Just a tip - try to do 2 reviews for every post you send in. This keeps it fair and means that everyone has a ...