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Re: The Rogue ~ Prologue
Hi Merry! I'm really sorry but I can't do a detailed critique tonight, because it's really late and my fingers are numb. So this may epic fail as a review. ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {eight}
Chapter 8 The memory of the journey to Beaufort Mansion was set deep in Anne’s marrow, such was the cruel penetration of the cold embedded in her skin. She waited ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
Hey there, namesake! ^_^ That's fine and dandy, but where be the link? :wink: -Sarah with a H!
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {seven}
Kirsten - Thankyou for you, ahem, slightly frenetic/hyper suggestions and of course, your unduly worshipping of Henry. Not to mention the fansite. :lol: Lol, anyway, your critiques make me fall ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {seven}
Written in a terrible rush, and it sure as heck shows. But I needed to churn something out, however crappy, to keep me sane. :wink: Chapter 7 It was with ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {six}
Thanks so much Kirsten! :D To everybody reading: No, Kirsten hasn't suddenly become a crazed with Edward Cullen type fangirl. It's a long story, but she ended up creating a ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
Alright people, I'm getting to them. Shina, the rules say I don't do multiple requests, lol. ^ ^ So I'll try to get to at least one of those.
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The oddity.
Hey, I figured it was about time I posted one of these. My name is Kirsten, but I much prefer my middle name, actually, I don't like my middle name, ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 4
Here again! :) The fire licked at the wood in the fireplace, colliding with the humming of the birds that danced in the afternoon air. Lovely description to start with. ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
Shina, yours is done. ^ ^
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The really short story
Hey there, angelsymphony! Sarah here as requested! :D I'm not going to do a line-by-line, nitpicking critique, because your spelling and grammar seems to be looking good. And anyway, the ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
Sofi's is done! :D
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {six}
Thanks so much for critiquing, Angel! Your comments are so lovely and apt, they are really helpful when I edit each chapter. Thanks for reading, Meep. I'm glad you enjoyed ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 3
Here again! :D I've just realised I've been confusing Maxine and Emily in the previous chapters, so forgive me for that. The blue of the morning spilled into the dawn, ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: The Jane Effect Part 2
Here again! :D As she turned the silver knob, Emily grunted impatiently behind her. Seeing that Emily is a superficial little madam, I think 'grunt' has the wrong connotations. Maybe ...
Dec 30, 2008
