CastlesInTheSky

Hi Angel! :D Yes, finally some conflict. I found this chapter beautifully written and it has improved in leaps and bounds from your last writings, which I found slightly passive, ...

*In no particular order* I tattle on June [springrain], for about the third time, as she is generally amazing, is a wonderful friend, and provides intellectual conversation in our MSN ...

Zomg, I hadn't read any of your fantastic reviews for this chapter yet! Shame on me. Thanks so much for critiquing, all of you. Haven't got time to do individual ...

Oh, thanks so much for the critique, Ducati. :D I love your critiques so much I re-read them about ten times a day to make sure I didn't skip anything. ...

Thanks Kirsten and Angel! :D Yes, bit of a cliffhanger to torment you with. xD Though I'm working as fast as I can on Chapter 10 - I always get ...

Hey there, yukis! Before you submit a piece of work, it's common courtesy to edit for mistakes. I noticed not all the proper nouns are captalised, some of the words ...

Hey there, poppy! :D I'm Sarah and I'll be your reviewer for today. Ben shrugged and sat beside on the bench, Insert 'me' after 'beside.' “Cause you know what real ...

Hey there dusty, and welcome to YWS! :D The rules over here are that your reviews-posts ratio should be 2:1. In normal English, it basically means that for every piece ...

Never mind, Sara. I think I found the link. And it's done! :wink:

Here I am again - Yay! :D First to review. I Anyway, I love this style of writing. It is very refreshing, and I love the modern gothic style you ...

Hey there, Sara! [name stealer!:P] Squall, Demeter and Lily have managed to point out all the nitpicks I wanted to say, so I'm sorry about that. I do think a ...

Chapter 9 Anne’s crinoline skirts were completely spattered in blood. She was hunched over the deplorable figure of her mother, sprawled over the bed, sweat glistening on her forehead. Quickly, ...

Ah, here again. I'm not up to doing a line by line critique,because my fingers are numb, and anyway, this looks to have all the nit-picks smoothed out, so far. ...

Here I am again, trying desperately to repay you. :wink: Her manner had been overwhelmingly joyous ever since the mention of the ball that the Greenly's would attend come sundown. ...

Thank you so much for reading, you two. :D You're lovely for following this all the way through. And both of you - thanks so much for pointing out those ...