CastlesInTheSky

Hey... I wasn't offended at all, as I love a good joke, and I am a Twilight hater. The books are overrated. (: This was hilarious and made me laugh ...

Wow. All I can say, is, wow. This was beautifully descriptive, Hauntingly poignant. Oh and by the way, Happy Birthday. Sarah

Chapter 1: I don't quite know where to start. This is so confusing. I never should have begun in the first place. He was stupid to suggest it. Maybe I ...

I am going to be very honest with you: This is an extraordinary piece of work (: Reminds me of my favourite book, a Swift Pure Cry, by Siobhan Dowd, ...

This was beautifully controlled and artistic. The constant dialogue made it gripping and mysterious. I loved it all, it really made me cry, for some reason or the other. This ...

I absolutely loved this. No grammatical/spelling errors, so no technical nit-picking of mine to mull over. I agree, there is something extremely intense and hypnotizing about this. I love the ...

It's always this kind of romantic atmosphere in new places. It's fun to imagine being , for example Sara from "Little Princess" who's having a feast in the attic. Of ...

"No." I tell Mom that right away. This was phrased a bit awkwardly. I think instead, you should write: "No," I tell Mum right away. Me, Misty and JK had ...

Hey, this is really great and you are an awesome writer. I've been reading all the chapters up to this one. It's centred round really great protagonists and I love ...

Amazing. Hilarious. I read it straight through from beginning to end. It has an excellent plot, it's well written, it's funny and sensitive and the central characters are superbly portrayed. ...

Some nitpicking of mine: They were standing at the bottom of our drive next to a bossy red car, A bossy car? Not sure I've ever heard of that one ...

It had been a long two years that passed by; A better way of phrasing this is: It had been a long two years had had passed by. That's just ...

Thankyou very much (: As you can see I've edited it according to what you suggested. I know this hasn't got great potential for a novel but it is just ...

This is a story that I decided to write inspired by me and a friend. We were talking about what we would name our child, when and if we had ...

A vague topic description, but it will make sense as you read the chapter anyway. Picks up from where the first two chapters leave off. Michael Bane is going to ...