CastlesInTheSky

Reviews please? Thankyou

Hello again, Castlesinthesky. Hello to you :D Oh, about the "Year Seven", it doesn't mean seven year old :lol: , it means like Grade 7, that's what we say for ...

[quote="Chirantha"]This is my first story so please read it and critic _______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________

Chapter 5 Fidgeting nervously, I stood uncomfortably outside the room, not knowing whether to knock or to just enter. When I’d walked into a science lesson, my teacher had handed ...

Chapter 4 When Mum asked me that question, my world just about stopped spinning in its orbit. For a moment I didn't find any words to say. Then, I stammered, ...

Thankyou Chiranthra :D Yep, I'll be sure to review the spacing.

Chapter 3 Chapter 3 I went to the admissions immediately, and said falteringly to the middle-aged woman at reception, name's Amelia Harper, and my dad told me to come here, ...

Again, thanks very, very much, aspiringwritertobe, And thanks for posting something about my work in the lounge, but it really, really doesn't deserve to be there at all, I mean, ...

[b] Awww, thanks, aspiringwritertobe for your review. It really made me smile, I thought for a moment I was never going to get any review (: Thanks a lot, I'm ...

Mom has made bangers and mash. That's an English meal, not an Australian one, right? Why not research Australian food? I just looked it up, and the results show they ...

09:37. Ugh. Mom won't be liking me waking up late on the guest's first morning here, but I need time to sleep. I need to sleep, because the next fifty ...

Could I please have some critique/reviews please? I posted before and no-one's reviewing :( and it makes me really depressed. Okay, an over-exaggeration there. Not meaning to nag. Thanks so ...

Could I please have some critique/reviews please? Thanks. Sarah

Chapter 2 My first instinct was to panic. My heart started thumping about in my chest, like a one-man army, and I felt lightheaded and sick. I sat down shakily ...

Okay, I was bored and decided I wanted to make something a little abstract. This was somewhat inspired by Adnamarine's avvie. ^_^ "come to the dark side, we have cookies." ...