CastlesInTheSky

Chapter 6 At the end of the month, Mum came home from the convalescent ward she’d been transferred to after a week at the hospital. We took her very slowly ...

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Wow, that is really sweet and cute, And yeah I agree, - it's difficult to draw and portray people effectively and you've really pulled it off. As well, (and this ...

[b]Aww thankyou Shannon :D Yep I'll be sure to look out for your reviews. *cries with happiness* Yay! I get reviews! :smt005 :backtotopic: In England, Year Seven is the equivalent ...

Thankyou so much for your input, jasmine12. Haha, who's Pete. Now that did make me laugh :lol: I love reviews with a bit of humour thrown in. Glad you like ...

Reviews are GREATLY appreciated! Part Three: A few times I tried to meet Kyle and a few of his friends at a party, and he tried to meet up the ...

Thanks for all the lovely compliments and criticsm, jasminerose. Oh so did you get bullied as well? I was for a period of time, and that is what helped me ...

Chapter Two part two continues with Chase. Please note that my spelling and grammar is far from good. Enjoy. Jo stepped forward, her bright green eyes never leaving mine as ...

[b]Thankyou so much for your comments, lyricalsunshine, I am reviewing the cliched beginning as we speak. Do you suggest cutting out the whole beginning and starting with the bit in ...

Once again, Thankyou, Chiranthra :D Have reviewed the whole ischemic stroke thing. Now, it's not the car accident that causes the stroke, it's the stroke causing the car accident, seeing ...

Thankyou so much TGLWooster :D Your criticisms were helpful as well as making me laugh, and yeah, I will get rid of tags. I seem to have a really bad ...

Firstly, welcome to YWS. I hope you spend many happy hours here :D Or something along those lines. I go over to Megan’s place on the weekend. Her Mum is ...

Wow. All I can say, is, Wow. This was beautifully controlled, with absolutely wonderful metaphors and imagery. The italics wasn't redundant and was used in all the right places, which ...

This is the beginning of chapter two of my story Forsaken. Please note that my spelling and grammar isnt good at all. This story has two narrators. Joanna and Chase. ...

Oh, how sad. You are right, it takes a sad twist. Well, I suppose you are getting better. No mistakes as far as I can see. This time you only ...