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Re: Stains
Hi Stella! Sarah here. The murderer leaves the room, the door swings close softly, and their victim gasps, gulping their last, precious breaths. I think 'closed' should have a 'd' ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: A poll
Agnes Grey was just unfathomable ramblings. xD I didn't get past the first chapter.
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: June's review thread
Hi June! :D Sorry to inundate you with requests, they're all chapters of the same novel. And you can take your time! xD Chapter Five Chapter Six Chapter Seven Thank ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: A poll
Gah! :P It seems I shall have to even things up, Kirsten. Yes, I love Charlotte, and I take full credit for driving her to this. You shall not convert ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Pomegranate Seeds iii (their world)
Hi Stella! Sarah here. She sits with him now, on an ebony throne to match his, as people appeal to him. I think the second part of this sentence would ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Haha Merry. :P I do actually wear glasses, but I hate taking pictures with them on. Eek. It's just a self-concious thing I have. ^_^
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: The Book Game!
"A square rigged vessel, sir," the reply came shooting down. From Secrets of the Fearless by Elizabeth Laird.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {ten}
Lol, thanks for the somewhat unusual critique, Kirsten. You make a fine detective. :wink:
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Beggar's Utopia -- Chapter Three
Eoghan from the XFactor! *squee* He was adorable! I shall love your character forevermore. On with the critique. :wink: I'm kind of doing these chapters back to front, but oh ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Aww Do, you're so pretty! Gorgeous cheekbones. And I love that hoodie! :D
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Show and Tell
Nearly anyone who's ever posted a piece on this site has heard the infamous advice, YWS's pet peeve: “Show, don’t tell.” Those three words can be incredibly frustrating to any ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Beggar's Utopia -- Chapter Four
Hi there, Blink! So sorry about the wait. :D The colours attracted, drawing Logan’s eyes open. 'The colours attracted' sounds somewhat detached, because you aren't really using the verb in ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Royal Reviews
I'm just working on Blink's. :wink: Twooster's should be done presently as well.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Tipping The Velvet {twelve}
Chapter 12 Thick, foul-smelling smoke twisted frenetically out of the pristine black funnel, engulfing everything in a melancholy sheet of grey. Soft bright vapour came up against hard black ironwork,
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: The Classics and Philosophy thread
Oh dear. :oops: Methink's I've started up a Charlotte vs Emily war. Though I must say, as before, my loyalties still lie with Charlotte. Sorry Kirsten! But Emily is second-favourite. ...
Jan 4, 2009