CastlesInTheSky

anyway, a lot of what people have said on here are stereotypes. There's always an oddball so why discuss? *nods* 'Nuff said.

Done!

Hi Demeter darling! Sarah here! :D Sorry this is late, I've really been slacking with reviews recently. Who could ever think now that behind those delicate features, there's a little ...

Hi, Kirsten! :D Here as requested. I don't think I should do a line by line as there aren't really any grammar/spelling mistakes or phrasing issues. I must say, I ...

Hi there Kirsten! a most strange spectacle; to behold the stars, glimmering. I do agree that 'glimmering' doesn't quite fit in with the atmosphere you're trying to create [which is ...

Thanks so much you two. It'll be a while till Chapter Thirteen, since the dreaded school has started. But I is workin' on it. :wink:

This is awesomeness, Griff.

I'll get onto it, sugah. :wink:

Getting to them, people! :D

Intelligence, definately! Computer games or books?

Winning by 3 now, dearest. :wink: The public has spoken. And yes, you may want to slap me with a fish after reading this message. xDD

well I'm sorry we can't all be beautiful and extroverted. I think you'll find a lot of us are introverted, actually. :) And I'm sure you're beautiful as well, outside ...

I agree with Kirsten [above]. This poem has some lovely moments but you need to make it more tangible. You can do this by using concrete imagery and vivid descriptions. ...

adminlove - You all look great in those costumes. silversunlight - You're so gorgeous. ^_^ Love your hair and skin. Monki - You're adorable! I want the sunnies! The big ...

Eeep, just give me a few more hours, people. Subsequently, don't hesitate to give me more requests. We're never lacking capacity. :wink: