CastlesInTheSky

Aww thankyou everyone. Youre all awesome. Rosey, that's a really valid point; I'll edit later and expand on the bit where I say telling can also be vital. Kirsten, it ...

Hi Lord Anzius! :D Here as requested. On with the critique. Why? I asked myself. 'Why' should be italicised. Well I recon it looks a bit hostile, but that is ...

Don't tell. Show. Nearly anyone who's ever posted a piece on this site has heard the infamous advice, YWS's pet peeve: “ Show , don’t tell.” Those three words can ...

You know you're a writer when you sleep-write. XD, Gahks.

Hehe. Don't worry now actually. The contest is over so I've done yours [Anna09] anyway. xD

Banned for failing to capitalize the letter of your first word and therefore provoking the grammar Nazi in me. :wink:

Hi Anna! :) I wasn't going to critique this until the Imagine Contest was over, as you can probably work out it wouldn't be fair for me to critique something ...

Tess of the d'Urbervilles by Thomas Hardy Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte A Room With A View by E.M.Forster Jude the Obscure by Thomas HardyT ...

Lol, Anna. :D I couldn't do your critique since it's one you entered in my contest.

actually, you're winning by 3. learn to count *laughs evilly* Actually... *looks up cackling* It's 4 again. :P

I'm back on the game, so feel free to hassle me for more.

Twooster's is done! :D

Hey Twooster! :D Here as requested. I know, this is unforgivably late. Sorry about that, I've been so weighed down with schoolwork. [/bad excuses] It caught at the thatched and ...

Demeter! :D You're absolutely gorgeous, I'm so unbelievably jealous. And you're exactly how I imagined you! For some reason I have this fixed idea of how the Finnish look, and ...

Dude, we're winning by 4. Surrender or Die! :evil: Okay, I wouldn't go that far. xD -hands Kirsten tissue-