Cassie9960

It was good but you need to indent on every paragraph

Thanks for your info! I'm sorry, I didn't mean to post it so early! I meant to save it, but I guess i hit Submit!!

I peered from behind my textbook as Mr. Johnson droned on and on. I looked at the clock repeatedly as the minutes ticked by. Just a few more minutes, I ...

This is good but kind of confusing.

Ok it was really good. I can't wait till you start writing the actual story. Please PM me when you do. See ya!! Cassie

Talk about confusing! It was good but first you said her dad had bright blue eyes. Jossette hated how here fathers bright blue eyes seemed to be glazing and his ...

I loved it! Write more soon, please!!

Thanks for the advice!

I loved it! This is my third time to read it! Why won't you write any more? Please do soon. Okay, bye!

"I'm scared!" I cried hugging my knees as I rocked on my butt on the cold stone floor. "God, help me." "But I am here." Echoed the voice again. "And ...

Thanks everyone except RENA!!!! I don't think I'll continue my story, my spirits were kind of crushed. For everyone who actually wanted to read this story, it was going to ...

I loved it!!! You were really good with describing. PLease PLease Please write more soon!!!!! Cassie

Who was the main character? And was it a girl or a boy? I was confused. I didn't like it at all. (Sorry if this is harsh)

I pulled the purple petunia from the ground and held it to my nose. Inhaling deeply I was satisfied. Love. My love. It had felt so good to hear those ...

I liked it, alot. You need to write the fourth one soon!! I am anxious to see her reaction.