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Re: The Vampire's Story: A New Beginning Chp.3
I was flying through the air, heading towards Callie and Steven's house. I was going to take her and make her my slave. Their bedroom window was open so quietly ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: The Vampire's Story: A New Begining Chp.2
I checked the pregnancy test, it was positive. To be honest, I didn't think vampires could become pregnant, but I was. Me and Steven were finally going to have a ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: The Vampires Story: A New Begining Chp.1
Thanks for the review. I'll have to admit that I didn't do a spell check :P!! First off my only reason I didn't do it is that I don't really ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The Vampires Story: A New Begining Chp.1
Something was wrong here, really wrong. I sensed it in my gut. "Andrew, what's happening?" I cried into the nothingness that was my life. "My dear callie, I love you. ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: The Vampire's Story: A New Begining
I could feel his breath on my neck, I could feel him all around me. "Steven stop. You're scaring me. You need to eat now!" "But I'm about to eat ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Vanished Prolouge
The door swung open as the wind twirled the hair about my face. The blue eyes staring at me through the door were dark and mysterious. "So, you've heard of ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: The Day Things Went Wrong
Thank you for the reviews!!!!
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: The Day Things Went Wrong
This is not my original idea. It is a horror story my friend told me a long time ago, but I'm going to retell it. The whole story. Thanks!!! The ...
Feb 11, 2010 -
Re: Found
It was good but In the beginning you said her name was Cnthia, not Livia. And now you're calling her Livia?????? It confused me, but it was pretty good from ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: The Last Chance Prolouge
Elena stared blankly at the wall. The moment when he, Daniel, the most popular guy in school had asked her out, she had been so nervous she lied to him ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
I loved it!
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Breena (Fourteen)
Thank you for sending me that PM, I can't wait until you send me another saying you posted chapter fifteen! Can't wait to read it! This one was really good ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Death
What is the meaning of death? If we die, where do we go? Will we be happy, or will we be sad, angry, unwanted? Will we be remembered? Or forgotten? ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Breena (Thirteen)
Yay!!! I loved this Chapter! Thank you for writing it!! I am so excited to see what happens next!
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One: The City is Strange
Oh another tip is don't give a short summary of the story, I was going to read all of it but now sense I kinda know what will happen I ...
Jan 1, 2010
