Cassie9960

The rymeing doesn't flow very well. If you had wanted to ryme it should have gone onto the end. For example: The little black cat wore a fuzzy green hat, ...

I liked the story, I just think you need a few minor corrections that the others already got to. But other then that it was wonderful!!!! Just try to be ...

I stood against the wall as Steven circled me, he studied me like a cat studies a mouse. I looked calm, but on the outside but on the inside I ...

You need to add way more to your story. It was way to short. I liked what you wrote about though. I also liked how you showed the hatred between ...

I thought it was a very good story but you defiantly need to describe you characters more. Some thoughts I had during this sory is, What does Beth look like? ...

I have read all three of your chapters and have enjoyed all of them, i hope that you will be writing more soon. I think you have a great career ...

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Honestly, I didn't like it. Why? I HATE stuff about death. It made me feel sad.

What is love? We give it to others and others give it to us. But after years of loving, that single person will rip out your heart with only three ...

What is love? We give it to others and others give it to us. But after years of loving, that single person will rip out your heart with only three ...

I loved your story I think everything about it was perfect!!!!!:):):):):) I loved the quotation marks!!!