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I hope you enjoy the first chapter!!! I worked hard on it, reviews are welcome!! "I love you,Steven," I whispered, not knowing how the words slipped out. Idiot, I thought ...

this is a prolouge type thingy.

He's perfect. THe perfect man has come into my life. But there's a twist, he's not what I've always wanted, for inside him, a monster is growing. A beast within ...

He had disappointed her. He had killed her, his true love. He had killed his brother too. Why did he go to Ashley, why did he dig up her grave? ...

i liked it, i think it should be longer though. So if you don't mind you should add a little more to it and maybe even describe your characters more ...

ATTENTION! This is Cassie, there will be a second book out in a few days, it is called The Vampire's Story Volume 2: The Truth. I hope you will read ...

I liked it. The person before me already got to the nit picks so there is nothing really that I have to talk about. OKAY, so i guess keep up ...

i loved it. i like how you showed how angry she was that her parents had done that to her. your scenery sounds beautiful, i wish i could go there!! ...

i liked it. It was pretty good, but like the others said, you should change the title. I don't like the original title right now. SORRY! But other than that ...

The next morning I drove to Andrew's house to visit him. Drat, I thought, today's a Tuesday! The cool breeze began to circle around me as I held myself for ...

OK I don't get it. I sthe whole scene with her boyfriend a flash back or what? And you jump around to much. What happened to her? How did she ...

nice work. I kinda liked the first chapter better than this one. I liked how it was Crickets point of view, not Austins. I think you need to describe Austin ...

Hi guys this is Cassie.This is a really short chapter. Sorry but you'll have to wait a little bit to find out what happens. "What are you?" I repeated. "I'm ...

You need to write another chp. please. it is killing me.

I think jayleighsmith got to it, but she's write. Where was she before? You need to give the chapter more depth and again, make it longer. you jumped to the ...