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Re: Romeo and Juliette: Twisted (2)
Tink tink tink. I pressed my fingers onto the keys of the piano, playing out a simple song I had made up with the large amount of lessons I had ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: Issues
Haha, thanks! And yea, it is pretty creepy, but my super CRAZY friend was joking around. And I just felt like writing it.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Only a dream
This was wonderful!! You should really write more! It was great! I loved it!! You're an excellent writer!!! It was very interesting and fun to read. Please write more pieces ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Dear You.
This was really good and deep and it had a good amount of emotions. This was greatly written! And it's a brilliant story! All of the other reviwers pretty much ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
This was a good little story that basically describes love :) It was really good. I think you should try writing a novel or something like that hahaha you know ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
This was really sad and sweet and touching. You are an amazing writer :) I really want to read more of your works!! Happy Writing ~Cassie
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: First Date
This was cute! A very entertaining short storie! I have a few nitpicks though. Ok... 1)The ending was cute but it didn't end very well I'm sorry to say, I ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Once Bitten *once edited!*
Hi ^^. I really liked this it was really interesting. I love almost anything that has to deal with vampires :) I absolutely agree with the other reviewers. (And yes, ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: You Told Me (1)
Thank you so much for the comment!! I don't know why it wont let me space the paragraphs... my computer does something funky ya know? It's spaced on my rough ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: You Told Me (1)
DON'T READ THIS UNTIL YOU READ THE CHAPTER!!!! Jordan isn't who he seems to be, and he's hiding a dirty secret from Krystal!! :) I hope yall enjoyed this chapter!! ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Issues
"So tell me why you're here, Jalen." The therapist's eyes were a deep grey, she was so calm and relaxed, so unaware of what I was about to tell her. ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Jagged
I liked it but you should have continued it on. I didn't like the ending at all. Sorry :/ Well, I agree with all of the reviewers. XOXO Cassie
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Changing Me
I like it but I also agreed with NickelPickle. It does sound very much like a journal entry, not a story. There were a few spelling errors but you know, ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: cigarette smoke
Really good job! Loved it ;)
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Wow. I really liked this story. Got me thinking...... well did it really happen?? (Please excuse me for being a bit dumb!) I think it was so deep and it ...
Feb 7, 2011
