CassandraInvisible

History class! Haha.

All in all, this is a good piece of writing. You need to be more careful with spelling and grammatical errors however. One thing I don't understand is Ben's very ...

7.5/10 Cute.

Well, I have a triumphant ending formulated in mind, I just havn't had the time to write it =] I'm going to work on a title, I just don't want ...

Okay, so I picked up on this in an lj community and I havn't seen it here yet, so I thought I'd share and see if anybody likes it. Basically, ...

JC Chasez haha

7/10 Thought provoking, but could have been 'spruced up' a little.

7/10 It's interesting, but not something I'm passionate about.

I'm no Christian, but this poem struck me as touching and sincere. I like this verse in particular: Why'd she have to leave today and why's it got to hurt? ...

I really liked this. The imagery is fantastic, I could see in my mind's eye what was going on and feel what the girl was feeling. The only line I ...

I was her friend. Not that they’d know. As far as they were concerned, she was a nobody. A nobody that they could throw cruel words at, like ‘emo’ and ...

I really enjoyed reading this. My favourite part was: [i] Look to standardized intelligence and try to reach it, but still there is a barrier and I can’t seem to ...

6/10

wolf

The story has a good basis, but I got a little lost. The way it's written is rather confusing. The dialouge is all heaped together, sometimes two different people speaking ...