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Re: What does this username make you think of?
History class! Haha.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: The Day He Left - Chapter One-
All in all, this is a good piece of writing. You need to be more careful with spelling and grammatical errors however. One thing I don't understand is Ben's very ...
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Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
7.5/10 Cute.
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Re: Silent Scream
Well, I have a triumphant ending formulated in mind, I just havn't had the time to write it =] I'm going to work on a title, I just don't want ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Music drabbles
Okay, so I picked up on this in an lj community and I havn't seen it here yet, so I thought I'd share and see if anybody likes it. Basically, ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
JC Chasez haha
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
7/10 Thought provoking, but could have been 'spruced up' a little.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
7/10 It's interesting, but not something I'm passionate about.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Why Now?
I'm no Christian, but this poem struck me as touching and sincere. I like this verse in particular: Why'd she have to leave today and why's it got to hurt? ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Yes, Little Rock
I really liked this. The imagery is fantastic, I could see in my mind's eye what was going on and feel what the girl was feeling. The only line I ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Silent Scream
I was her friend. Not that they’d know. As far as they were concerned, she was a nobody. A nobody that they could throw cruel words at, like ‘emo’ and ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Heartache, The Handling Of
I really enjoyed reading this. My favourite part was: [i] Look to standardized intelligence and try to reach it, but still there is a barrier and I can’t seem to ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
6/10
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Word Game
wolf
May 4, 2008 -
Re: A short story- The note from his heart
The story has a good basis, but I got a little lost. The way it's written is rather confusing. The dialouge is all heaped together, sometimes two different people speaking ...
May 4, 2008
