CassandraInvisible

This was really beautiful. I'm totally impressed. If there are any mistakes, I didn't pick up on them (maybe because I'm in class and could be caught on here at ...

All in all, a well constructed poem for something written so quickly. No light, leading which way. No voice, calling your name. No feeling, pulling you this way. No heart, ...

Cellophane!

Honestly, I found this very hard to read. What put me off were the myriad of spelling and grammatical errors. You really should proof read this, or get a friend ...

Thank you for all your reviews and suggestions. Memorizing not memorising Favorite not favourite I'm from NZ and we spell things a little differently here =D Quote: The minutes ticked ...

The pie. Would get it's gunk all over the knife. My does my neck hurt?

I would say this is more a little quote than a poem. It doesn't really have any true elements of poetry, though it is clever. When I saw the title, ...

Ah yup. So yeah. That's meeee.

Bingo =) I suppose it wasn't too hard. Um. Sophie?

The AC is on way way way too high- The room's frigid 'The room's frigid' should probably be put on another line. It ruins the flow of the stanza. And ...

Wow. This is a very vivid, descriptive poem. I felt like I could see everything happening. like graphite voices from wooden slats and steel rails, oxidized with loose feet and ...

Ummm.... Casey! =D

5/10

7/10 Cuuuuute.

*This story is inspired by a friend. I want to make it PERFECT before showing it to him. So I need heaps of advice! Also if you have any ideas ...