Cassandra

...How can you have just written your first novel if you're still writing it and it's only 10,500 words? I'm confused. Do you mean that you're writting you first novel...? ...

Alrighty, I've got a critique coming here, slowly but surely. It's taking me a couple of days because this is so long, but it's coming. :D

wheel

Hi there! I'm Cassandra, and I look forward to reading your work. PM me with any questions, or if you would just like someone to critique something you've written. :D

^ Ditto.

fur

Since this is such a good piece, I get to be really nitpicky. :D somehow our proximity to reality seemed so far away. isolated from civilization but in proximity of ...

NO one knows Does NO have to be capitalized? Where it had begun. I'd change it to Where it began Up,up,up- Need that hyphen? The one-way ladder- Again, need the ...

anarchy

But what is age when it comes to true love? ;)

Yeah, except if you've got the words of the song in your head rather than the words that should be flowing onto the paper. :D

How do you cure it? (Woot! 250 posts!)

discord

red

What type of cheese should the boomerang be made of?