Cassandra

Reading. And chocolate. --Florence Helene Florence. Isn't she wonderful? --Keeper Guy (Nameless, as of now) What is your favorite thing to drink?

Huh. I haven't welcomed you yet. Welcome to YWS, Luna! PM me with any questions you have, and enjoy yourself! :D

*hugs* Hullo there, and welcome to YWS! I *points to self* am fourteen as well! And what do you know; I also like to write! Kooky, eh? ;) And. I ...

The main conflict has not been highlighted yet. These first few entries are meant to establish the daily going-ons in Emily's life. Her world will suddenly go topsy-turvy by the ...

Hey, and welcome to YWS! I'm mostly a fiction writer, so you won't see me in the poetry forums much. PM me if you have any questions!

Nice start--are you continuing this? And I love your description. It's so pretty! And near flawless grammar as well! Just two things I noticed: With the beat of the bosons ...

I disagree--this is NOT mess. It just needs some fixing up. One thing you want to do is make sure you set up the conflict very early in this story. ...

Dancing is the only thing I'm good at, and probably the only thing I could ever make a living at, so I have to be very careful not to get ...

Definitely just do a read through of this--most importantly, read it aloud. To a wall, to your cat, something . What can you gain by this? Well, if you listen ...

As Sam said, yay for proper grammar! Seriously, you have no idea how much of a relief it is not to have to tell you to use commas, dammit! :D ...

1. My owner. Because he's mean to me. 2. The ringmaster. He's a corrupt fraud. 3. All the people who come to the show and laugh at me. They count ...

I second Mesh, and also: The Literary Forums Select the genre your piece fits in and start a new topic, just like you did here. If you have any more ...

^ Is it really only nine days? *Dies*

Good point. This could probably be applied to my work in progress *pokes*. Mind you, the only way I move that piece forward is to think to myself, "Now, what ...

*Cheers* Congrats, Brad. You definitely deserve this!