Cassandra

--First person is yummy. It gives you the opportunity to ramble. :D --Writing buddies are a huge incentive to keep writing. Yay for competition! --If you try hard enough, you ...

I think it must be natural, because I can't do it. --Florence Helene Practice. At least I think so. Because you have to force yourself to focus, and teach yourself ...

That clears it all up then. Pretty cool! And as I said before, your description is so yummy to read! Nice work. :D

That makes sense--I thought it was lacking something! But I guess I was kind of afraid of adding too much of myself into the article and not enough fact.... Gah. ...

I'm signing up now, I guess; I wasn't sure before whether I'd be able to, but when I realized it went up to the sixth I thought, why not? So ...

It's fantastic the way you start off with action. Your first sentence hooks the reader right off the bat, which is, of course, key. Glancing around, I was glad to ...

The idea of this is what kept me hooked, most definitely--I mean to say, it kept me thinking, "What the--?" the entire time. But in a good way! ;) The ...

First off, your prose and description were beautiful. Apart from the one typo below, I don't have much to pick at. Nice work! Let’s go for a walk” I demanded, ...

“What’s up,” I say "What's up?" is a questions, so drop the comma and use a question mark instead. Joe is Filipino and a prominent member of the Asian clique ...

without giving a hippogriffs hindquarters about how I look Nice. XD The two of us made our way painstakingly slowly down the stairs to the common room, pausing before actually ...

If you can develop your main character more, you're gold. One thing that this piece lacks is really any emotion. Obviously there's the potential for emotion there, because this is ...

I haven't posted much of my work here, mostly because a lot of it is crap/isn't finished, but the stuff I have posted I've gotten some good reviews on. Of ...

Another article for my school newspaper that desperately needs a more exciting title. Ideas for improvement are more than welcome, and I also would like to know, from you NaNo ...

Nice work, Imp! :D

Everyone's going to hate me for saying it, but the Harry Potter series were the first books that actually inspired me to write and to try writing. As for other ...