Cassandra

This is really good advice and I definitely need to try this. I've novel for th last couple of weeks, and I really need to get going. I figure I'll ...

I like the subject matter. Like what it's about? Yeah, I thought that was really good. I liked the first three lines. After that, I thought the rhyming got a ...

Hooray! I get to be the first one to reply! It was a little confusing, mainly because I didn't know what was really happening...maybe that's what made it good? Maybe ...

There's a quote from John Ames in this writing book I have: "The problem with creating a complete photo of your character is that we all have varying standards of ...

I thought that was absolutely beautiful. When you read it, you can almost feel as if you've been to this island before, like its a part of you. Your imagery ...

O Humanity These admirers, they admire These conspirers, they conspire I was reading this and thought, "Oh no... this won't work.. Admirers... admire..." but to my surprise it did. Saved ...

I didn't like the first stanza so much...I'm not sure why. It didn't flow so well for me. But after that it was just...wow. :shock: I mean, it was really, ...

I can't seem to come up with some constructive criticism for the beginning and end, but the middle I loved. Overall, nice job. :thumb:

It's nice and short, and the meaning is clear and easy to grasp. Nice job! :thumb:

I really liked it and thought that it flowed really well until the last three stanzas...I'm not sure what happened. I think the ryhme scheme changed, and then in the ...

I really like the image this conjures, all the shimmering ballrooms and masks. I love the edited version. Great job! :)

Three words, Short, Sweet and Simple . Nice work! :) That just about sums it up. I like that you are able to get right to the point and still ...

You paint a beautiful picture in this poem and the imagery is great. I can completely picture this scene. Great job! :thumb:

I see my life in raindrops; tiny water-bubbled memories, as they fall. I liked the whole thing, but I liked that imagery above especially. Nice job. :thumb:

The fierce ocean leaping over distant rocks, Moving closer to me at every heart beat. Feeling the pulse racing trying not to look, But hypnotised by the powerful waves I ...