Cassandra

Hee hee...nice hat... Did you make it?

Rei - Ha! We can both be the old timers, keeping the whipper snappers inline. :D When you say that it makes me think of old wrinkly grandfathers who always ...

Whew! I didn't know it was going to be this long when I started reading it. But it was worth it. :D First off--the beginning. It sounds so ordinary compared ...

tree

I always love your poetry. It's so beautiful. And the imagery in this is fantastic...the pictures your words painted=beautiful. Great job. :D

^His town/city has an interesting name...

thin

I liked this because it's easy to relate to--almost everyone has gone through something like this. Do you need those hyphens in the first stanza, though? I don't think I ...

I might: you wouldn't know, would you? ;)

short

If she doesn't notice a topic that she has, in the past, been very active in, doesn't that make her oblivious?

^ Has a froggy avvie! :D

You don't really have to worry about originallity if you're honest. I mean, if you're true to your characters and everything, it will be original. ^I've read this somewhere before. ...

Mesh, the logo is one of them, and there are plenty of grammatical mistakes (not my fault! I swear!). Then there are all the extra smilies that still won't work ...

Argh...such a tough decision... Black. Acoustic or Electric Guitar?