Cassandra

Fun read. :D ...please post more? *puppy dog eyes*

What time zone are you in?

Loved the imagery! No word was useless: every word propeled the poem forward. Great job! :D

land

7/10 Hee hee...made me smile. :D

Runt hunt

What other time?

Does "Clouds" need to be capatlized in the last line? Yeah. That's about as much help I can give with a haiku, I guess. They're very hard to crit. I ...

7/10 It's interesting. Makes me wonder what the person is looking up at/thinking about.

I would absolutely LOVE to be published some day. I have a novel in progress at the moment...I've been trying to get some outlining done which, funny enough, makes the ...

enemy

daft

Why are you deaf?

kitten

feathers