Casidyliddell

Your writing is gorgeous. Thats all i can say

I see a large use of Dramatic Irony in your story, Very good use of metaphors and similes. I love how you show a sense of darkness in your writing, ...

Prologue Lightning struck the west wind fire and i could not tame myself enough to step out into it. I watched the building were my former home had once lied ...

There's something about the title that automatically captured my attention, I was expecting something a little longer but otherwise very creative and good luck!

Very well written.