Carmina

I am a survivor of 13 years of Catholic education. I'm still recovering. But seriously... From my limited perspective, I make the following statements about the controversy over which is ...

In discussing the issues of tatoos, I am always reminded of a girl I used to know. She got a tatoos of a sun around her belly button. It was ...

(I haven't posted anything in a while, and haven't written anything either. So, here's something I wrote for a class a while back that I have been tinkering with ever ...

Fear of a word does increase its power, but over-use of a word decreases its power. If you only swear when it is a big deal, truly emotional, then the ...

Different needs require different research. I will respond here assuming you mean research for a story/play/poem/novel. I have not written historical fiction yet, so I have not had to worry ...

One of my mom's housecats. They are the most spoiled rotten, lazy, worshipped creatures of all time. Picture it, sleeping 20 hours a day. Massages whenever you want. Treats sneaked ...

I tutored writing and grammar for two years. Your grammar hurts me. You are guilty of the dreaded comma splice. For example: "‘I shall ask you not to joke about ...

FYI it is not wise to put your full name, phone number and address on the internet. There are crazy people out there. Have you ever had a stalker? Why ...

I never introduced myself when I joined the site back in May, so I guess I'll attempt to remedy that. However, this is the internet so I don't give out ...

Hugs!!! Welcome. Age is a state of mind baby. 100 is young for an elf.

I thought this was a dirty poem, it seems pretty pg to me. I didn't see any stuffed crust pizza in the poem eithor. :wink: Ok, on topic. I liked ...

I like this poem. I really get it. Suggestions: the repetitions are cool as far as motif and unification, however with the length of the poem, it gets a bit ...

I normally do not like repetition in a poem, although here I don't mind. The repetition of "That is Nature"is like a refrain. That works alright. Some suggestions. For clarification, ...

There are people like this; yes, that is true. As for the actual poem I have some suggestions. It is such a short poem, I do not recommend repeating words. ...

Welcome to the site. It's not too scary here. Most of us are pretty nice. Ignore the rest of us. :wink: