Carmina

I blame Hunter.

(This is another story I''ve been kicking around for a while. I promise to write something new eventually. :) ) Portraits The masks watched her with impassive, blind stares. They ...

I like the structure. You have some great imagery. Such a sad tone. Question: What is a "should-high hello"? The last full stanza is a nice ending to the poem, ...

Only nit-pick I have is that you say "And arms, to grasp at anything- " before you say, "I plucked out hands to create the New". I thought the hands ...

I agree this poem is stronger at the beginning than at the end, but I don't know what I would change. I like how it is about jogging, or at ...

I wrote my first story when I was four. It was how my mom taught me to read and write. I dictated a story and she showed me what the ...

Being over the age of 18 and feeling out of place, I think a sister-site geared towards the older demographic is a great idea. I'm not sure about that name ...

4/10 for the first one because I'm not big on public displays of religion. Just a personal thing; I mean no offense. 8/10 for the second. I like that quote.

Hunter is good at recruiting people to this website isn't he? He recruited me too. Welcome Empress Kat.

Congrats on sharing your poetry. I'll try to be gentle with you. I applaud your use of multi-syllabic words and getting them to rhyme. You have a very scructured rhyme, ...

Thanks Snoink

I am getting married in less than three weeks. It is going to be outside in a garden. My pastor and my Aunt (who is a deacon) are performing the ...

(This is just a brief scene with a character who came to me in the middle of spin class. It isn't really a story yet, but its a start) Affirmations ...

Ignore Incandescence. I liked it. It's punchy. I can picture the speaker doing one of those angry head rolls like the chicks on Springer. Sorry, poetry makes me think of ...

Ok, the visual I got from this may be totally nuts, and I know it isn't what you were writing about, but... I pictured like two soldiers and one is ...