Carmina

7/10 I like that it is home made (so is mine :D ) I wish the lines were darker so I could see it better. I didn't even notice the ...

When I am really bored I will watch tv. Usually it is something sci-fi. Still, even though I am currently an unemployed loser, I only watch about an hour or ...

Had dinner with my honey. Finished my first quilt (nothing to write home about hey, a first is a first) Found out I may be getting a bigger house soon.

Bobo, I checked out your site. You are missing a genre of art. You have Web Design as art but you don't have Photography? Sigh, a dying art form.

I like the word play. I like that you invent new compund words. I like the play on words with, "I wrap up in your down". Up and down is ...

One correction: "idealist" is a noun. "Idealistic" is adjective. Aside from that: I am, "civil as an orange. And something of that jealous complexion." (place the quote if you can. ...

Its a cute little quatrain. No idea for a title. Maybe just name it after your favorite place to go fishing.

Incandescence doesn't like any poem that has the word "you." It doesn't bother me. I kinda like the alternating stanzas. I am not sure if it is deliberate or not. ...

Love is an inadequate word for the vast array of feelings and experiences that the word is supposed to sum up. There is love for your fellow human, platonic friend ...

9/10 because its all animated and stuff.

Nice little story. I like the twist. Some cleaning up to do though. This paragraph, "He skimmed through the files a while longer; born August of '87 to an upper ...

As this is a work in progress, I hope you won't think me too cruel. This reads like notes for something you want to write, not something to in any ...

I think this poem has potential. I would like to see it broken up into stanzas. I think it would help separate your ideas better. Although running it together like ...

(I am either too literal or too abstract; I am not sure which.) I dreamed I found an oyster And knew it was the world Inside it was a pearl ...

Thank you all for commenting. Q, you asked where the idea for the masks came from. I do ceramic sculpture. I was having writer's block and was looking around for ...