Carlymillie

Gunboi

Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Prologue - Kindness
Nice ....I liked it...
Thu Sep 14, 2017 5:26 am
Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Goals
This is so nice...simple and exact
Wed Sep 13, 2017 6:12 pm
Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: The Vampire
I love how you played with your words. But for me I think the last line killed the very energetic vibe you had begun with.
Wed Sep 13, 2017 3:43 pm

Maybe I should say something quote-worthy, like, I dunno... "You can only be happy if you decide to be happy?"
— Necromancer14