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Re: Universal Heart Break
I jump off the ship and quickly catch on to to your hips. I pull you up and I am greeted with your lips. Though something is wrong, you move ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Universal Heart Break
I am crying in my ship. Seeing you and your dude just broke my hip. I am so crying as the ship takes off from the forest. I'd be lying ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Kitten In the Hat
I was just like the Kitten in the Hat. Just learning to kill rats and to make friends with the bats. And other cats. Not knowing what I'd grow to. ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Universal Heart Break
I travel the universe searching for you,threw worlds red and blue, old and new, sparkling star systems and threw a black hole into new dimension. Might I mention I am ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Generation X
The reality is sad today, many children drop out of of school and do not practice absence. At my school, there are 2500-3000 students enrolled. There is not one time ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Rooftop leaping
The person who is leaping across roofs is laughing because leaping far distances and onto buildings is death defying. He is laughing to keep himself from stopping and freaking out.
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: Lemons, Advemturers and Girls 2
Last time.. our adventurers were transported from the Krom warehouse into... and they are just awakening from their experience. Talen awoke, his head was throbbing and felt sheets over his ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: "Of Mice And Men" Comparison Essay
This is CardDragon. For your notice, I am not good at reviewing essays for school. Well I shall try to review your essay. - Well it was not very attractive ...
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: Name finding tips
I will suggest Komi, it sounds cute but also has a dark feel for it. Though Melissa would work.
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: The Royal and the Truthful
In the land of Limits there was hardly a law. Tyrants ruled and many natives were forced from their igloos. This is not a story of the brave and the ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Beautiful Boy
V.2 Beautiful boy, you've always held my heart Even from the start That version 2.
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: the angel nobody appreciated
I do have any suggestions, but input.This poem refers to a girl as an angel that is downcast-ed by people.This girl is good and faithful in her future.Though this angel ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Do Not Cross part 2
I read part one,(then this part) but this seems like an odd but fun story. My guess is that this takes place in some Utopian world, where girls married to ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Times We Spent Together....
This poem could use some work, the words could use a bit more flow. Some words I do not know what they even meant, you might want to explain at ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Pit of a Miracle
I make it a practice to ignore who ever wrote the story. Who ever wrote this story, I will have to give you a thumbs up. The story started off ...
Jan 30, 2011
