CardDragon

Amanti Bram stared out into the blue sea. The sea was clear and you could see the animals swimming down beneath. No one was around, it was a time when ...

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Hello Sharice, I am CardDragon, many people refer to me as Card. My real name is Jelani,(Gel-lan-nee), enough about myself.I'm here to tell you about YWS. I joined YWS this ...

Such a beautiful place...

I wish I would awake, but the words in my dreams seam to bake. Just right into one nasty stake that I ate. Not right while awake. The voices are ...

Hey Dude! It could pay to be nice, this work didn't come from a elephant's behind. Just because you know who to write poems better than me, doesn't mean you ...

Hello, Card Dragon here. Well your poem is not as interesting. It is just a bit dull, but it has a point : You can not stop the flow of ...

You live near a forested area, my father would like it there.

Well its not much of a prologue, it should be placed in the beginning of chapter one. There is no telling what the story is going to be about, but ...

I really did not get why you called it magic(because I am not you). None of the stuff refers to magic, except how fast things can change( and that is ...

This is really shocking to read, I only had to read it once and I understood it. Though I did not like what the poem was about ,a teacher and ...

Well Upon reading it , I could actually understand the poem. It is a good poem, and a good example of a non-rhyming poem.

A bit weird , it would not be a song I would listen to. It could be better written ,but I guess the point of it is for it to ...

Is this like a world cup for story reviewing. Best get reviewing!!!!!

Hello this is cardDragon, though I speak little Spanish, but the computer doesn't. It is a good poem but a bit confusing. It says in ruff English translation: One night ...