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Re: The Lost Heir
This is a dead storybook!!! I'm just struggling to write on it...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: A World of Chances (Started)
Reno Redwing "So, who are you all?" asked a man , he was buff. I did not like this dude one bit as far as I could throw him. (Not ...
Aug 13, 2010 -
Re: Hightide part2
very helpful wise human
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Hightide part2
Books,thought Stacy, a lot of books. The Nora Bookstore spanned to what seemed like miles on top of miles,though it was only twice as large as a normal building. Stacy ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: A World of Chances (Started)
me neither, I can't find a picture of a blue haired male... that is real.
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Pain
In short this poem was not horrible, but it could use some work. Still it is good for a book character to say. You may want to use a metaphor ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Leah. When I awoke it was morning, but I wasn't in the bookstore. No, I was out in the wilderness with total strangers to find a missing prince. I got ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: A World of Chances (Started)
Name: William Motto Redwing Nickname: Reno Age: 19 Gender: male Languages: french,Spanish,English College: MIT Picture: 42-15536859.jpg Written description: About 5 foot 9 inches tall. Tanned with cra
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
I guess my character is a she now. Just have to change the profile..
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Leah I couldn't remember how I got here. I blinked, it was night time and I was in a forested area. I sat up, and then I remembered. I must ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
I'll think I'll claim a hyena. I am new to story-booking,so it may not be perfect. Name: Leah Stark Age: 16 Gender: male Animal: hyena Appearance - Written: Has brown ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: HIGH TIDE part1
says the high school drop out... :)
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Duel
It is a good story, but I agree with ReicePiecey you should describe the characters a bit more along with the fighting scene. For example you can use... 1. slashed ...
Aug 3, 2010 -
Re: HIGH TIDE part1
Hey Torigirl 16 do you read books? Obviously not much....I'm writing it as if the reader were the king. One note of advice, you should try to think out of ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: HIGH TIDE part1
Ridiculous, I had to write this story quick and you don't have time to check for grammar mistakes.Though I do admit, I went to fast in writing this, my house ...
Aug 2, 2010
