CaptianRandom

Hey everyone, I made this poem after I finished a math test, hope u like it. Stay What a day Full of grief What’s the point of living? When it’s ...

Hey ROC, i like this poem, but i feel it didn't go anywhere. i liked the length and the spacing within words. All Together i don't know what to think ...

Every day i wake up and think DAM SCHOOL, then all of a sudden its the end of the day, Every Monday i think DAM SCHOOL, then all of a ...

Hey Artlover2227, my name is CaptianRandom. First of all i love art and what your writing is right, but some people have different perspectives of art, street art might be ...

Hi kingolions, its CaptianRandom I loved this poem, how yo described how people say they will die for you but they never say i will live for you, i loved ...

Hey RepublicOfCoter i loved this poem, very descriptive, good length for a poem like this, nicely spaced, and i loved how you described the stars and the moon, if they ...

This poem is my cousins and he wanted me to put this up on YWS hope you like it, i will tell him all about the reviews. Anger is as ...

There no such thing as a perfect moment Once you are in the moment one little thing can tip it off the earth One little thing can destroy everything Small ...

Hi Hibiscus my name is CaptianRandom, First of all i really did not like this poem, in all honesty you could have turned this poem into a short story, it ...

Hi kitrosemon13, im CaptianRandom. I LOVED this poem, it was fantastic, good length, space within the words and a lot of description. i lost myself in the fantasy of my ...

Don’t be afraid of the dark, because whatever you’re scared of might not be able to see you. The Dark, Endless blackness, Endless grief, Endless unhappiness, Endless shade, The dark ...

Hey Snoink, Captian Random here, i really thought this was history not poetry, like no offence, it was to short, and not any feel in it, but you did allow ...

Sometimes I feel like I'm always left out, Sometimes I feel like a miss out, Some times I feel like I’m the odd one out, Sometimes I feel like I ...

Hey spike71294, im CaptianRandom, I loved this poem, it is filled with description, and depth of love and of cores hope, i didn't mind the length of the poem and ...

Rain is depressing Rain is calming Rain is salvation Rain is death Rain is depression, when you stand in it for to long then you just stay depressed Rain is ...