CaptianRandom

what?

thanks i need to improve on my grammar i should re read my work :)

your right sorry i was trying to make a poem but my mind was all over the place and i was not thinking properly.

One day I was taking a walk on the beach; it’s a nice day, not too hot to sweat but not to cold to not enjoy the day, a nice ...

It’s a summer’s day, and I just finished my greatest painting i have ever done, then the unthinkable happens… It’s a catastrophe, it’s horrible, it’s unforgivable, but it’s already done,

RepublicOfCoter, thanks for your support, your really helpful (sarcasm) kingolions, thanks for your support (not sarcasm)

Yes you were hard on me, this was my first upload, and i am not very good on grammar.

ideas are all around us. :) that is so right

In the debts of darkness, one must find light in order to find ones true self. You can’t always get what you want but you must always get a little. ...

In the debts of darkness, one must find light in order to find ones true self. You can’t always get what you want but you must always get a little. ...

Welcome to YWS Captain Random! The poem has turned into a blob of text, that makes it difficult to read and even harder to critique. Most critiques involve looking at ...

thanks for the advice, i asked my friend to read it and he told me to put it in passages but i already posted it up, mabye i'll change it ...

Today I went for a walk in my head, when I got to the center I found nothing but darkness and a crowd of hundreds of unhappy mirror images, they ...