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Re: :: Rain ::
Really strong, i like how you relate rain to love, rain comes and goes, as does love. But at the same time love is like fire. Its different, i like ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Last Halloween at Desolate Creek Chapter 1 Revision 1
Thanks for the advice guys, this was a "sloppy copy", i was hoping to get some good criticism and I did! I did my best to revise everything, I probably ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Virus - 1
Really cool idea, and sort of reminds me of I Am Legend but from a female perspective. I like it :D Cant wait for number 2.
Oct 8, 2009 -
Re: Exodus Preview
happy-go-lucky hit the nail on the head. Really good detail, gave me a good picture of the time and characters. Hopefully part 2 will be just as good.
Oct 6, 2009
