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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: :: Rain ::

    Really strong, i like how you relate rain to love, rain comes and goes, as does love. But at the same time love is like fire. Its different, i like ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Last Halloween at Desolate Creek Chapter 1 Revision 1

    Thanks for the advice guys, this was a "sloppy copy", i was hoping to get some good criticism and I did! I did my best to revise everything, I probably ...

    Oct 9, 2009
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Virus - 1

    Really cool idea, and sort of reminds me of I Am Legend but from a female perspective. I like it :D Cant wait for number 2.

    Oct 8, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Exodus Preview

    happy-go-lucky hit the nail on the head. Really good detail, gave me a good picture of the time and characters. Hopefully part 2 will be just as good.

    Oct 6, 2009


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