Caoimhinmarc

Thanks for the reviews, you two! I really appreciate it. Yeah, I am kind of having problems with the purple prose.

Yes, the story for me was good. But I agree to some of the people who said the lines are cheesy. They really are. The bf-gf moment would have been ...

[Hey, friends! I would just like to consult to you this piece. It's just a part of the story but I want to ask if the narration is okay.] The ...

Since your story, as you said, is too short, you can still add some details on the events. Put some more information about the narrator so readers could feel the ...

This was a fun read. You just need to polish it. You have misused/substituted some words like "there" for "they're." I was amused, yes, by the narration. I felt the ...

An abandoned prison gets kind of creepy especially when a psychopathic person lives there. I was making my personal poison put a comma or a semicolon it was called Capitalize ...

Dear Ellen Taggart, Ms. T remember that sweet boy we used to know him as Ryan? He has changed a lot. I don’t know how to tell you this. But ...

LOL! This is totally the first episode of the Legend of the Seeker. All these things you wrote happened in the show. You just changed the characters' names (i.e. Katelyn=Kahlan, ...

Wow. You know, my friend and I were texting in rhymes, too! I told her it might be fun, so we did it. It was just last week. By the ...

My obsessive-compulsive nature impedes me on doing a story with good narration (I don't do well in story-telling because I edit first, LOL.) So I made a piece impromptu. Sorry, ...

Hey, guys! I am a new member of the Young Writers Society. Perhaps some pieces of information about myself would attract some YWS people who would eventually, I hope, become ...

Be nice :) My life ended three months ago. I feel like I have an expiry date – like my life is already over, like I’m just biding time. In ...