Cannonball

For ladymarmalade: Thank you ! :)

For Evenslily: That's my english; i haven't used google translator and my first language is Italian and not english. :) Thank you for Nitpicks and for your compliments. :)

Italian version: Ogni istante accentua sempre maggiormente l'inclinazione di questo vascello, ormai piegato oltremodo. Una sinfonia dalle sfumate note musicali spreme una stempiata ironia su questo ta

Welcome here ! :) This is a very nice place where you can publish your works ! :) There are a lot of interesting people, and i hope you'll have ...

Really nice, I love it. The metric and the rhymes are really good, and all this gives great sonority in reading. Then, the last verse is very special, includes poetry, ...

Welcome to YWS!

Thanks all people ! :) It's a pleasure to be here on this website ! . :)

Thanks! :) Very kind. :) Yeah, i've chanced direction at the end and for a while, I started to speak in the first person. This was because this change improve ...

Italian version : Camminando, lascia per strada cristalli di ghiaccio. Non ha calore; non sa stare in mezzo alla gente. Si impietrisce nella fredda anima che lo assembla, non lasciando ...

Nice work :)

Welcome here ! :) i'm new me too :) I hope to write a lot here and read some of all you people. :)

Hello! :) I'm new too :) These are my starting days here ! :) Welcome to all you too ! :)

Hello to all people ! :) Hello Laminated and welcome here ! :)

Very nice work. I really like how the feeling is so powerful and strong. Clear words and courage in expressing them. It's great.

ahah so strange.