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Re: Burning Past (makeshift title) A Short Story...
Overall I think it’s great! Although there are one or two small issues I would just like to point out – At the beginning you use a similie ‘like a ...
Jul 25, 2009
Overall I think it’s great! Although there are one or two small issues I would just like to point out – At the beginning you use a similie ‘like a ...
Jul 25, 2009
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