Cameron

To begin with, sci-fi is not one of my preferred genres of literature- though I have read the odd one. For me to be able to enjoy sci-fi I have ...

It was all over the place. It wasn't very pleasing to read. The ryhmes were forced (as Misty said). Overall, I think you concentrated too much on ryhming and not ...

Simple, not extraordinarily intellectually challenging...but enjoyable all the same.

Monkey, There are of course many ways to interpret a poem. With regards to your third comment, I rather like the way I phrased this verse, and if you want ...

With regards to Sam's comment- I could be wrong- but I interpreted "there are no children here" as stating that because of what the children have gone through in Israel ...

It sounds to me more like a long, drawn out story than a poem. To begin with, you probably could have structured your poem a bit better- the verses are ...

RoseEmma, I congratulate you on channelling your emotions in a productive manner, but if you are simply writing for therapeutic reasons, and have no interest in improving your work, you ...

A storm approaches to strip me of my childhood. I can feel it like the tension in a room, before the exchange of angry words. No longer are there monsters ...

I too found the gender somewhat inconsistant and confusing, but it didn't distract me from the overall meaning of the poem. I simply noted it and continued reading. I was ...

That was something for sure. I especially enjoyed the dialogue between the two "characters" in the poem.

Words fall short of a poem that defies expression lol

I don't know why some of you have to be so critical. I mean of course no poem, or anything for that matter will ever be perfect, but this has ...

What did you, did you not like about it?

The passage of time is difficult to illustrate. Can it be summed up in a matter of instances; those few choice moments that left a lasting impression, those that didn’t ...

There is another within me. He is a wild man, Laughing and cavorting around in merriment; Brothers we are This man that lives in me is a wise man, Yet ...