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Re: Chuck Norris jokes
When Chuck Norris falls into water, he doesn't get wet, the water gets Chuck Norris.
Aug 26, 2006 -
Re: Why is Shakespeare so flippin' sweet?
Shakespeare had a remarquable understanding of life, i.e. he was extremely adept at capturing the essence of what it means to be human. I believe that it is this talent ...
Aug 24, 2006 -
Re: Woah! What Happened To The Front Page?
I am a fairly new member to YWS and I have to say that this new format is extremely intimidating to someone who is just learning how to maneuver around ...
Aug 24, 2006 -
Re: Bubblejuice
I liked it. However I agree with Monkey. Also there is one verse that I thought could be improved upon. Love isn’t weightless, my failure is countless: It appears that ...
Aug 23, 2006 -
Re: Where does everyone live?
!!!I AM CANADIAN!!! specifically, Ottawa, Ontario, Canada...Rei we're pratically neighbours!!!
Aug 22, 2006 -
Re: Unending Ends
Thanks guys, I'm flattered.
Aug 22, 2006 -
Re: When do you write?
I don't really have a predictable writing schedule. I've had months where I haven’t been able to formulate a coherent sentence, and than there have been periods where it seems ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Hitching a Ride
I think you have to be careful when you use parentheses in a poem. never close fully, (doors in your heart). I'm not sure if I like that you included ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: Troll
Amazing stuff...the only thing I can suggest is removing that green thing on his back. Other than that I'm speechless.
Aug 20, 2006 -
Re: The Fearless
I really enjoyed this. I don't know if Waffles did this purposefully...but I interpreted some religious references in the story…maybe it’s just me.
Aug 20, 2006 -
Re: Unending Ends
My floor is littered with the pages of things left unsaid, muffled voices that still call out from empty closets unceasingly wishing to be heard, but I will not allow ...
Aug 20, 2006 -
Re: Mauve Beach
There still has to be some element of sense can be abstract sure...but even the most abstract poetry has some underlying element of structure. Anyone can just slap words onto ...
Aug 19, 2006 -
Re: Halfway to Purgatory
Is heaven reserved only for those with a gleam of divinity in their eyes? Only for those able to grapple the fact that they are damned— (damn fools) or rather ...
Aug 19, 2006 -
Re: Mauve Beach
This has potential, but I find it a little too repetitive (half loves) and it looks almost like your throwing random words into your poems that don't really belong or ...
Aug 18, 2006 -
Re: Gorgeous Neon
I liked this, oddly enough. However, I agree with the other comments, I would really like it if was a little more organized and easier to read. There is a ...
Aug 18, 2006
