Calvinn

Reread! It's such a change of pace to see a writer with so much potential. I loved both your ideas, the Traitor Game and this. I don't want to push ...

Really? Never thought of it that way! I love Harry Potter, so that's very flattering :) To be frank, I was quite hesitant with the 'conscience perspective' as I thought ...

I meant the part where I stated that consciences started out as free consciences, but then their life force is tied to that of the humans they guide i.e. when ...

Hey Gold :) Thank you so much for this review. About the contradiction regarding the demise, I've been thinking about whether I should scrap that for a long time! I ...

Hey Deanie :) Yes, you're totally right, I got the feeling this chapter did not look up to those preceding it and it was also not as well received as ...

hey Knight :) thanks for the review, will take a look at the site soon! Thanks :)

Wow Deanie...these reviews were so unexpected! Thanks so much for the feedback :) I do need to work on certain confusing details! I'll admit I've been toying with the idea ...

Hey GoldFlame! No, not at all. I felt this chapter held a few jarring pieces I needed to smooth out at once! All your suggestions are just spot-on. Thank you ...

I'm a fan of the series, so it was meant as an honour hehe :P

In fact I complimented GoldFlame on writing so eloquently at that age. Piece of advice - remove your comment, for here is not the place to pick out arguments for ...

You're really twelve? I can't believe it. I feel so redundant! So jealous :(

Nono, not at all, but as I was reading through, I thought this chapter COULD come across as being somewhat superfluous. Great then! I'll take a look :D

Hi GoldFlame! I'm always so pleased to find a notification of your review :D Honestly, you are the best reviewer I ever had, hands down! You can tell a lot ...

that is MUCH better :)

O.K., great! I would honestly love to read more of this :)