Calmal

This is chapter 4 of Tainted Life seen through the eyes of Captain Cask, who is now pursuing the mysterious UFO that arrived in the Earth system. Chapter 4: Threat ...

You have made a couple of spelling mistakes towards the end of this piece: Half and hour later should be Half an hour later and relatives or friends are mission ...

Very interesting. Its nice to see different ways of expressing creativity. Good piece! Though I don't see the point in rating it 12.

The reason I use a different character per chapter is I figured I cannot tell the story through one character. So the chapters will be seen through different eyes each ...

Here is Chapter 3 of "Tainted Life". This Chapter is seen through the eyes of the Leader of the Braxton Solar Navy. Chapter 3: Wavering loyalties. Ducis Das. The leader ...

There are a few grammatical errors within this piece. Try to avoid repetition and replace it with different words i.e instead of using the characters name use "he/she" or "our ...

As a Junior Writer, I also agree with Coco and Stealth Slicer that there is something missing. I agree with Dubian that some of this block does not make sense. ...

Thanks for that Stealth Slicer. I have now changed it slightly to bear the description of the High Priests. Enjoy everyone else!

Welcome everyone!

There are a few grammatical errors that I wish to draw to your attention. When you are talking about a large number of people it is "too many" rather than ...

Here is the second chapter of "Tainted Life" by Callum Marshall. Chapter 2: A Disturbance on Farge. High Priest S’Lman. Sitting on his meditation mat and completely emptying his mind ...

This story is too vague despite your early warning. We need a hint of something about to happen. Science Fiction is set into ten main categories: Hard Science Fiction This ...

You have made a good start to what good be a succesful story. There are many films and stories about super virus' affecting the world and wiping out a large ...

This looks like a really interesting story. You have considered the plot and characters. I suspect great things.

This looks like a really interesting story. You have considered the plot and characters. I suspect great things.