Callie17

Hiya! First off, I thought your poem was really interesting.I especially liked the twist at the end (if indeed, it was a twist, maybe it's just me being stupid! :) ...

This is a paragraph from a story I intend to write. I may break it up into smaller paragraphs, i'm not sure yet. The house had been there so long, ...

Thanks for your comments, I will definitely make those improvements. :)

She sits, balanced on a huge iron beam, high up in the sky. Her uniform is bright yellow, with a shiny hard hat perched on her unruly brown curls. With ...