Calben

Hey I really liked this poem. The imagery hear is nice and greatly conveys the emotion the teacher is feeling. I think the word choice was not only on cue ...

Hey I liked these lyrics. I thought they tried to not only to convey a message but also do so with nice wording. The try seemed successful. The only part ...

A big event plays out, some instances wind down, the sunset approaches. The fleeting speciality of the everyday meets my gaze. A soft squirrel runs down a tree, grass lightly ...

I really liked this poem, it was good. It attempts to convey something real, and yet it retains that poetic element. I actually liked all of it except the last ...

Yeah this is great, really a refreshing take on a already depressing topic. The only thing that I did not enjoy was the use of again twice in the third ...

I really liked this, it read refreshingly simple.

The chorus man tries to sway voices into his pocket, he’s a nut with things higher than he’ll fully know. Tell me chorus man, where is the arch of gold ...

Each step lingered on the broken road, as i submerged into a two dimensional world. The marble lake and blind sky, blurred into a single blank page. Enthusiasm was left ...

A wheel, rain bowed, starts spinning. I'm on it, or rather in it. It’s a geometrical plane of sorts; the colors are infinite and the points in all directions. Every ...

The Ranger Over the hills and mountains beyond, Living next to a shimmering pond, Was a ranger with his sliver steed, And to every call, he would take heed. In ...

Roses growing wild, nature's garden, woodlands surrounding them like a green frame hiding the gem from the world; flowers bursting forth, held by stems covered in thorns like a porcupine. ...

The slow bond of an old grey man and beautiful young woman moves about the sides of a joke and the gentle motions they share He looks at her so ...

I don't like the large amount of commas or some i's left uncapped, and there were a few misspellings at the end, but whatever. I do know what you mean. ...

four out of five stars. I really enjoyed this poem, the impact is felt not only in it's interesting language but also it's meaning to the reader. It's trippy and ...

Thanks for the reviews. While I do like the line about 1000's of feet, perhaps changing it to "most will know it was his pen that achieved the greatest of ...